Also, the narrative would be way too clear for the story to hold water. The audience would totally understand and it would ruin the surprise of the ending, because in later events, Ned comes home to find that his wife and daughters have left him, and it’s been an entire year since he left. Without the point of view being third person limited the readers would know that the pools represent more than pools. They not only represent his friends lives, but they represent stages of Ned’s life and downfall. “The force of the wind had stripped a maple of its red and yellow leaves and scattered them over the grass and water. Since it was midsummer the tree must be
Also, the narrative would be way too clear for the story to hold water. The audience would totally understand and it would ruin the surprise of the ending, because in later events, Ned comes home to find that his wife and daughters have left him, and it’s been an entire year since he left. Without the point of view being third person limited the readers would know that the pools represent more than pools. They not only represent his friends lives, but they represent stages of Ned’s life and downfall. “The force of the wind had stripped a maple of its red and yellow leaves and scattered them over the grass and water. Since it was midsummer the tree must be