Outside Expectations In Wes Moore's Life

Improved Essays
According to statistics, African American high school student’s graduation rate is at 69 percent. This is impacting since it’s relatable to The Other Wes Moore by Wes Moore. Both Wes Moore’s lives significantly took different turns, there outside expectations were for them to fail and to make responsibilities their priorities. Outside expectations contributed to the other Wes because he became part of the stereotype of the average African American male, while Wes proved it wrong. Responsibilities play an important role in how their lives turn out since Wes stuck to military school and the other Wes had kids not supporting wasn’t an option. In society, people are shaped by there stereotypes and if society doesn’t overcome this face, success is not an option. Although this may be true, their environment shaped the way they grew up but since Wes’s mother cared about him too much he was sent to military school, while the other Wes was not reprehended when his mom found his stash. “Mary just coolly looked at him, eyes opened in an expression of exaggerated innocence.” (Moore 74) This line stands out to me …show more content…
His mother acted quickly and sent him away to Valley Forge Military Academy. This was an expensive school and his mother struggled to pay for it. “…Too many people have sacrificed in order for you to be there.” (Moore 95) Wes did not like it at first until later he spoke to his mother over the phone and realized the sacrifice his family was making for him. After that moment Wes made his stay at Valley Forge a personal responsibility. Moore’s mindset changed and now his goal is to surpass all his peers in all aspects. While for the other Wes the stereotype over powered him and he became part of it by spending time in jail, selling drugs, having many children in his teen years and increasing the amount of

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Bainbridge Colby, who was an American lawyer and politician, once said that “loyalty will not permit envy, hate, and uncharitableness to creep into our public thinking.” In the story Montana 1948 by Larry Watson, it is shown by the actions of Wes Hayden, that hate and the other reasons listed in the quote above, do not have an effect on the decisions Wes makes in the duration of the story. The events that happened throughout the story caused the decisions that were made by Wes, and shape his character. This provides insight into the complex person and character that Wes Hayden is. The complexity of Wes’ character is shown by the events in the story that drive the theme of family/loyalty and how that affects one's relationships with whom they are close with.…

    • 1002 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In The Other Wes Moore author Wes Moore unravels how the other Wes and his fate diverged. Wes#1 and Wes#2 narrate pivotal life events that teach them how to become a man and use the skills they acquire to survive poverty and manhood. Growing up in poverty without a father, as well as, learning to become a man is harsh when one does not have a father figure to look up to and a loving family that encourages success. In order, for both Wes Moores’ to be successful they need parental guidance, self-discipline, and positive mentors.…

    • 836 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    There are multiple factors that come into play regarding our environment: neighborhood, family, friends, religion, school, etc. Humans are constantly under the different influences that surround us, whether we know they are there or not. In Wes Moore’s “The Other Wes Moore” those factors are clear throughout the transitions in the two boy’s lives and how it helped shape who those boys have become today. Both boys started out in similar situations, both without a father and being raised by a single mother while living in Maryland.…

    • 969 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Having a supportive role model can shape an individual’s future and turn their life around if struggling. In The Other Wes Moore One Name, Two Fates, by Wes Moore, both Wes Moore’s made bad decisions, but the question arises from whether or not a role model turned the author’s life around. In “I Just Wanna be Average”, by Mike Rose, and “The Achievement of Desire”, by Richard Rodriguez, Rose and Rodriguez also had great role models who helped them in becoming successful. The author’s role models, including his mother and Captain Hill, and the other Wes Moore’s unsupportive family members, including his mother and Tony, had a lot to do with the future of the two boys.…

    • 1485 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Such small decisions can determine the outcome of your entire life. Those small decisions could be anything such as getting your homework done, which may lead to keeping great grades, that leading to scholarships and grants. Those small decisions separated the paths between both Wes Moores, from the novel, The Other Wes Moore. Both Wes Moores grew up on the same streets in Baltimore City, during the same timespan. They had almost the exact same environment growing up…

    • 912 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    People drop out of high school because they think that education is stupid or that they have something else better to do then to go to school. The other Wes Moore was unable to graduate from high school because he chose to drop out. Due to dropping out of school, the other Wes Moore into some trouble with drugs and ended his fate by committing a crime. I feel as though the other Wes Moore chose his fate because he knew that his consequences would turn out to be bad when he did them. Dropping out put the other Wes Moore in a predicament that he probably didn’t want to be in…

    • 849 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    With so much production and consumption of a plethora of different forms of media, too many people never need to need for it to be any different than how it is, never have to wish it would change. Too many people, unknowingly, take for granted something another group of people would weep with joy at finding. This is what being represented in the media can feel like. African Americans experience anywhere from negative representation to erasure from television, film, literature, and even the educational curriculum. This lack of active or positive representation stems from a long, complex history of slavery and racism.…

    • 1222 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Other Wes Moore the mothers play a big part in the boy’s life, they are the ones who teach right from wrong, and the ones who teach the consequences of their actions. One parent teachers her kid better than the other though, and that’s why they had different lifestyles. Although both mothers are concerned about their children’s future, Joy is the one who intervenes when things are going wrong for her son and makes a difference. The author’s Joy has gone through college and knows the importance of it.…

    • 525 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    However, Wes immediately ran into trouble with his superiors(p.89) even attempting to run away on four separate occasions(p.90). Chafing with his environment, Wes continued to cause trouble until he found a role model, Cadet Captain Hill (p. 97). Wes began to climb the ranks “with the support of people like Cadet Captain Hill”. And he soon was thriving there. Wes’s initial trouble and eventual success due to the help of those around him, illustrates how a person isn’t simply a product of their environment but they are molded by the people around them, most of all the people they look up to.…

    • 984 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    The author initially had a strong family unit: mother, father, and two sisters. After his father’s death, some of the security that went along with that disappeared, and changes had to be made. His mother was still made of strength, and she was determined to see only the best in her children’s future, willing to sacrifice as much as needed to follow through. The other Wes Moore had a deadbeat dad, a young, struggling mother, and an older brother setting a poor example. His father had no positive role in his life, his mother was barely keeping their heads above water while still trying to live a life she could enjoy, and his brother-on-a-pedestal was notorious for all the wrong…

    • 1461 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    “Wes went back to school immediately after leaving the juvenile detention facility... but he knew that he would not last long,” (Moore 110). Wes knew he was slacking in school, but he was not willing to put in the work to improve, he also didn’t have anyone that was willing to help him improve. Another key concept as to why the two Wes’ ended up with different lives was drug and alcohol abuse. Both Wes Moores were born in Baltimore, where many drug and alcohol related crimes occurred.…

    • 781 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Overall, the author and the other Wes’s lives ended completely different, yet started out similar. This just shows how much you can achieve when you have the right people in your life to help you, and have that determination to succeed. Otherwise, if you don’t give it all you’ve got, and expect the worst for you,…

    • 741 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As a teacher, what can you do to help your students deal with this pressure? The history of African American’s is acknowledged to be one of the most unjust in society. Tracing back to the early 1600’s where slavery first surfaced, African Americans were brought to America to do free labor. In chapter three of Deculturalization and the Struggle for Equality by Joel Spring, it is explained that education was highly denied to slaves due to fear that plantation owners had of a rise in rebellion against them.…

    • 834 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    The author Wes, however made a difference, and his impacts are felt, he was a decorated Army vet, scholar, and successful businessman. Wes made something of his…

    • 1565 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Have you ever chosen to read a book more than once because it was such an abundant book? If not you will once you take the time and read “The Other Wes Moore” by Wes Moore. This book is about two African American men who has the same name, live in the same neighborhood, has the same childhood background, but two different paths of lives. As you read the story, you will be astonished how two little boys had no idea about each other, but are so compatible. In this essay I will explain the comparison and contrast of the two Wes Moore’s.…

    • 1007 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays