It is ingrained in many young children to follow their dreams and to make career choices based on those dreams, but sometimes that is not always possible. Gordon Marino, an award-winning professor, brings light to this subject in an essay that he wrote and that the New York Times published. In his piece, Marino argues that it is not always wise to do what one loves. Marino persuades his audience to consider the possibility that doing what one might hate for the “greater good”, is more important than doing what we love. He builds his argument through anecdotes in the essay that confirm his credibility, appeal to the readers’ sympathy, and he creates hypophora’s to build his audiences’ curiosity.
Marino incorporates many rhetorical devices in his essay to make his argument a success. One of the first devices Marino uses is an anecdote. In this anecdote, Marino talks about a particular student that he advises; and Marino explains that the student is unsure if he should follow a more streamline career path as a doctor or a professor, or if he should follow his passion for comedy (Page 1, Para.1). By applying this anecdote, Marino uses his own personal experience as an advisor to help his readers relate to the struggles most students face when choosing a career. Later in his essay, Marino uses another powerful anecdote to describe how young adults in poor neighborhoods work odd jobs to help provide for their families Marino says, “For them the notion of doing what you love or find meaningful is not the idea that comes first to mind; nor should it” (Page 2, Para. 1). This anecdote helps Marino establish a powerful tone in his essay by letting his audience inside his life and how he views young adult’s choices. These examples show Marino’s effective usage of storytelling. Another important strategy writer’s use in persuasive writing, is to appeal to the reader as a credible and authoritative writer. In his first anecdote, for instance, Marino immediately identifies himself as an authority figure by introducing himself as a student advisor (Page 1, Para.1). As a reader, this fact shows me that his ideas are reputable because students come to him for advice and direction. One more way …show more content…
He does this especially well when he discusses the young adults he counsels, who work jobs to help their families. In his anecdote says “Many of them are used to delivering papers at 5 a.m., slinging shingles all day or loading trucks all night” (Page 2, Para 1). This sentence, in my opinion, is very powerful. I too decided to take on a job to help my family; therefore, not only is Marino persuasive through his use of sympathy, but for those readers who have made the sacrifice to work at an early age to help their families, he has summoned their empathy as well. Marino also appeals to the readers’ emotion when he confesses that his father worked a job that he hated in order to raise Marino and his siblings and put them through school (Page 2, Para. 2). The actual strength in the words Marino chooses to describe his father’s ordeal help make his story more vivid. For example, he uses words like “detest” and “labored” (Page 2, Para. 2). These examples of sympathy really drive home Marino’s