This poem was all about her dark life and how she had to fight to live everyday. How she is going to put on a smile, but about to cry. I read this as she is covering up her true feelings about life. Life is hard and has only been a struggle and view life so dark. She is hiding behind the world so they don't know the true her. Her writing is a deep dark tone of lack of hope she has for living. One line she said "even though I'm destined to die" describes her dark view.
Strong is a voice that really stood out to me when she would say they would never fall. Even though she would never fall she still said they would struggle to live. With lack of hope on her life she shares a lot of determination to how she is not going to fall. Struggling to live her life she stays strong even though she wants to give up she continuing to fight. Standing tall is how she shows herself not being weak, giving the us the impression of strength. This line is …show more content…
Dark is the voice I used to give off the tone of sadness and hurt. When writing this I was trying to make it about how the insults where taking over my feelings. Having almost nothing left of myself from being constantly put down from others. Strong was a voice I showed by "continuing to smile" even though I have been tore apart from their words. Disagree was the few final words used in my poem, when I realize that the words they are saying are not me. I was able to get my confidence back and remove the hate out of my life. My writing was using the same voices as the original piece and had a similar concept on that