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Erik placed his hand over her mouth.

“Shhh,” he said, “You have to be quiet, someone might hear.” Visions of getting caught flashed through her head and she had to stifle a loud moan.

Christine suffered in agonizing silence as Erik fucked her to the brink of orgasm. He was slow and… gentle. She felt ready to burst in more ways than one.

“Erik,” she panted, her voice strangled as she tried to stay quiet, “I can’t come from just this. I need-” Luckily he understood what she was about to say and snaked a hand around her hips to help her along.

“Erik!” Christine cried out. Her vision went blurry as she came and for one glorious second she forgot everything but the feeling of him inside her. He didn’t stop fucking her through her earth-shattering
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Christine felt strangely enraged by his short, cryptic sentence. How can he not believe us? Did he not feel it???

“When will you understand that we like you? How many more times will we have to prove you wrong? We’ve had this stupid crush for months and if you don’t believe it then I will drop this class if I have to!” Christine shouted, her face bright red.

A shocked silence followed her impassioned, but wholeheartedly true, statement.

“Christine…” Raoul said, his voice coming out in a soft whisper that floated delicately in the air. Familiarity that grew over the course of several years curled around his words like smoke. All of them knew that Raoul was only in the class because of Christine. “Are you-”

“Would you really?” Erik broke in. His expression was fascinated as he contemplated her answer.

Christine swallowed before answering, knowing her next statement would condemn her fate; she could, of course, just take another music class, not no one taught as well as Erik could. He was the best- and hardest- teacher she’d ever had. “Absolutely,” Christine said, her voice firm and leaving no room for
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Will he make me quit? What will I do afterwards? I could always switch to another teacher, maybe take more private lessons…

“I couldn’t make you do that, Christine,” Erik said in a defeated voice, “You’re the best student I’ve ever had.”

Christine’s mouth fell open. That was not what she expected him to say. “T- that’s nice of you to say.”

“It’s true,” Erik remarked, “I could see you starring in Le Nozze di Figaro or Don Giovanni; your voice needs to be heard on stage and it would be an honor to help you get there.”

Christine didn’t have words in response to his statement, so she impulsively hugged him tightly against her. “Thank you,” she whispered into his chest. He froze for a moment before returning the hug.

“This doesn’t change the fact that you’re both my students and this goes directly against almost everything in the student-teacher handbook,” Erik said sternly after Christine pulled away, looking at both Raoul and Christine.

“We won’t be your students in a month” Raoul said, “We’re both going to graduate soon and we won’t have to worry about any of this.”

“Besides,” Christine broke in, with a crafty smile, “It’s only against the rules if someone finds

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