each team will need to have a goal net that should be placed at either end of the field, along with a soccer ball. Once all these are acquired you are ready to have a soccer game. [Your complex sentence structure is awkward due to the lack of a comma between main and subordinate clause. Where do you need to insert a comma in this sentence?] The first step playing soccer is to obtain a Soccer field. The Size of the field is determined by the age level or the level at which you are playing. Each field has a goal box drawn on the field around the goal, with a penalty box around the outside of the goal box. In the center of the field you will find a circle, and straight through the middle, you will see a line cutting the field in half. [Your content development is lacking because this sentence doesn’t show exactly which way the line goes. What are the positions and directions of specific lines on the field that indicate where areas of play should take place?] Once you have found a field then you can focus on getting a team. Your team should consist of 11 players including a goalkeeper. [Your content development is a bit awkward due to the lack of coherence between the topic sentence (focusing on the team) and the supporting statement (rules of play). What is the focus of this paragraph going to be?] Normally each player is assigned a position that informs the player on where to stay on the field. Soccer positions consist of forwards, midfielders, defenders and the goalkeeper.…
I am a native of Ethiopia. The environment I lived in was pessimistic. I grew up holding back on my dreams and not being the best I can be. As I progressed in school, I was always told that I could not make it and that I was weak. Girls do not have that much value in my society; therefore, I was told I had no power and I could not achieve what I sought. I went to a predominately male school. My school had ample opportunities for the majority of the students, but not for me since I am a girl. I…
made out of wood sticks. I was a little afraid to play on that soccer filed because I was already committed to play soccer at Dallas Baptist University and I really did not want to get injured in any way shape or form. The game started and it was very one sided because we were playing there Ugandan High school soccer team versus a bunch of students who play other sports and not soccer, I was the only true soccer player. 2nd half started and the score was still 0 – 0, The ball was played high in…
Boldt was incarcerated for civil contempt this penalty is usually imposed on criminal sanctions since it is an offense of being disobedient to or disrespectful towards court of law and it presents a behaviour that defies authority, justice and dignity of the court. Notably, Ms. Boldt was charged for civil contempt since she abused the rules and responsibilities of her position as a mediator, set by the government and still proceeded to break the rules knowingly for over eight years. Ms. Boldt…
The girls are the offense and the guards are the defense (Garcia). The offense ends up convincing the defense to at least commentate on what is going on. During the match, the guard commentating notes that an offside has occurred, which is the title of the movie. Offside is “a penalty in soccer, one committed by an offensive player approaching the goal” (Garcia). Those not in the arena, both girls and guards, are disappointed. Likewise, the title’s subtle meaning is that the girls trying to…
Introduction It is very important that hospital adheres to the guidelines that stipulated that if patients return to the hospital for after being treated for 30 days there be a penalty of some sort. This guideline came about after the implementation of the affordable care in 2010. Before the implementation of the affordable care act, there were over 20% of readmission to the hospitals 30 days after being discharged (Rice, 2015). These penalties can prove to be very costly, as a result, hospitals…
• This week at the Crisis Center was a bit uneventful compared to the previous weeks since I have started. I participated in a Residential Emergency Shelter Check In on Thursday, September 15th with a client who had not had any previous contact with the agency. The client, Amy*, had recently been in abusive situation with her boyfriend and was seeking out a safe place to stay. The client completed the intake with a volunteer over the phone and was approved for shelter by an approval staff…
occurred at the end of the game and at the end of the season. Once again, Goldschmied and Espindola recorded that facts in their 2013 article. The article says that there are 1.14 fights per game in the preseason, 0.54 fights per game in the regular season, and 0.13 fights per game in the postseason. It also says that the percentage of games in that season where a fight took place was 61.63% in the preseason, 37.62% in the regular season, and 10.14% in the postseason. In addition, there were no…
Time unfroze and all I saw were Bethlehem players surrounding the official and shouting out words of complaint. For what? It appeared to be that the ref called offside and the goal was withdrawn! We could not have been more relieved and overtime did loom. All the players were cramped up for overtime, so both halves of overtime were relatively quiet. Penalties would decide the champions. We were the first team to get penalties started. It was three-two on penalties after four out of the five…
trimmings (Weeks, 2007). With the goal of increasing recycling and reducing waste, federal, state, and local governments offer their citizens both incentives for recycling, and penalties for failing to recycle or declining to comply with regulations. Much more can be…