The first important issue is the lumping of all men into one category. It made all men sound savage and that all men serial rapist with domineering tendencies. I will argue that not every man “has used superior physical strength or some sort of physical force or threat of force against a woman at least once as a teenager or an adult”. This statement leaves an open opinion that all mean are capable of battering their mother or wife and women should beware. This does not allow women to be seen as equal by being afraid of a man or even being aware of his capabilities. It puts a bigger gap in equality by pointing out another stereotypical unjust between the two genders. To make this article better I would have completely left that sentence out. It is a very bold statement to make when you are generalizing the entire male population. Instead, the focus should have remained on the men who have acted out violently towards women, not the men who
The first important issue is the lumping of all men into one category. It made all men sound savage and that all men serial rapist with domineering tendencies. I will argue that not every man “has used superior physical strength or some sort of physical force or threat of force against a woman at least once as a teenager or an adult”. This statement leaves an open opinion that all mean are capable of battering their mother or wife and women should beware. This does not allow women to be seen as equal by being afraid of a man or even being aware of his capabilities. It puts a bigger gap in equality by pointing out another stereotypical unjust between the two genders. To make this article better I would have completely left that sentence out. It is a very bold statement to make when you are generalizing the entire male population. Instead, the focus should have remained on the men who have acted out violently towards women, not the men who