Lott gives us a lot of real life quote to support her thesis and claim which helps the audience get rid of skepticism even if they have not seen the film The Help and Selma. What she did not do a good job on is wasting too much time, she repeats a lot of the same information, she tends to repeat the stuff she said in her introduction and also in her body paragraphs and then again in her conclusion. The article could’ve been 2-3 pages shorter if she was more concise with her
Lott gives us a lot of real life quote to support her thesis and claim which helps the audience get rid of skepticism even if they have not seen the film The Help and Selma. What she did not do a good job on is wasting too much time, she repeats a lot of the same information, she tends to repeat the stuff she said in her introduction and also in her body paragraphs and then again in her conclusion. The article could’ve been 2-3 pages shorter if she was more concise with her