Personal Narrative: I Liked The Class Version

I liked Stuart’s spoken version more than I liked the class version for many reasons. One of the main reasons is that Stuart knows his story more than anyone so he’s gonna present it the best. He knows when irony is coming up so he makes a pause. For example, in this story there is a lot of irony and I didn’t have a hard time finding them because the way he presents it. Like when morely said ‘ the kids seem to be having a great time’ the audience knew that the kids were probably drinking alcohol because the way he approached the sentence. It was nice to be able to figure out the irony that simple and it made it more comical. If I heard the class version before any other version I would have never saw the irony when Dave said he didn’t understand why the breathalizer said …show more content…
Also, Stuart knows how to pronounce all the difficult words. For example, some people in the class couldn't pronounce Schellenberger but some people could and it made it sound strange. It ruins the effect if something isn't pronounced right. If you know how something is pronouced and its defintion you can make changes so it’s more relatable for our generation. Stuart is more consistent with the changes, if he changes something on one page it will be changed on the others. With the class some students make relatable changes and some people dont pay attention so they leave it at the original state. I also like the flow that Stuart gives the story. If I listen to the audio for ‘Polly Anderson’s Christmas party’ I can't tell when he starts a new page but when the class reads I can tell because the voices change and cuts off a bit. Overall, I just like the way Stuarts voice goes with the story. I can just picture Dave’s voice sounding like Stuart’s voice and Dave talks a decent amount in this story. All the voice changes makes it sound less proffesional compared to Stuart’s version. To sum up, I like Stuart’s storytelling skills better than the