Firstly I wasn’t very happy with how much I relied on reading off my cards during the speech. After watching the speech it seemed as if over half of my speech was directly read from my notes and I would prefer to have more of the speech memorized. The second thing I could have improved on was my facial expression. My facial expression in the speech appeared to be bland and non-changing. I would like to have a more passionate facial expression that varies throughout the speech according to the point I am trying to present. Things such as a more exuberant look when I deliver a very important statistic or a stricter look when I discuss a very serious topic. Thirdly I could have improved on my conclusion. After watching the speech I noticed I could have done a better job linking the intro and conclusion, relating the topic back to the audience, and previewing my main
Firstly I wasn’t very happy with how much I relied on reading off my cards during the speech. After watching the speech it seemed as if over half of my speech was directly read from my notes and I would prefer to have more of the speech memorized. The second thing I could have improved on was my facial expression. My facial expression in the speech appeared to be bland and non-changing. I would like to have a more passionate facial expression that varies throughout the speech according to the point I am trying to present. Things such as a more exuberant look when I deliver a very important statistic or a stricter look when I discuss a very serious topic. Thirdly I could have improved on my conclusion. After watching the speech I noticed I could have done a better job linking the intro and conclusion, relating the topic back to the audience, and previewing my main