Personal Narrative: The Prince

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My life wasn’t always the best. Back when I was just a young girl, my mother fell ill and died short after. Every day after her death I would visit her grave and pray that I would turn out to be the woman she hoped for me to be. In time, my father remarried to a nasty woman with two unbearable daughters that found joy in pestering me. Although my new step sisters were indeed very pretty, they had evil souls. My step mother did nothing to stop them, instead egged them on and even replaced all of my beautiful clothes with raggedy servant clothes and uncomfortable shoes made of wood. I was made into a servant for my new family. I was made to feed the animals, wash the dishes, scrub the floors, and more. The more work I was made to do, the dirtier …show more content…
It came at an instant carrying a beautiful gold and silver dress along with slippers to wear to the dance. I rushed to get ready and set out on my way to meet The Prince. My own family did not even recognize me without the tattered clothes and messy hair. As soon as the prince laid eyes on me, however, he immediately invited me to dance with him and refused to dance with anyone else afterward. At the end of the night, I quickly ran off before he could ask of my name or see where I lived. I succeeded to beat my evil stepsisters and stepmother home and redressed myself in my usual tattered clothes and went …show more content…
Both of my step sisters seemed confident that one of them would be the future princess. However, whenever the one of them tried it on, her big toe refused to fit. I could hear my stepmother telling her to cut it off so that she might become the princess. Although, it must have failed because I then heard the prince come back and ask for my other stepsister to give the slipper a try. Although I wasn’t in the same room, I could hear her tell my stepmother that the heal of her foot refused to fit. Likewise, she cut the heal of her foot off and forced it inside the shoe, but again the prince figured out her trick and returned her to the

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