How To Write A Narrative Essay About Moving Away

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Orientation: It was a really quiet night, the cricket neighbours were singing, the wind was howling and you can hear the talk of the loud community. I was Inside the safe and happy building that we call home, eating my hot mushroom stew that my amazing mother Ellen made specially for me, it was kind of disgusting but I could eat my way through it. Ellen was at the really old fire place fire place shovelling coals into the fire, she was sweating l so much She looked like a water fountain. But the hard thing is can’t tell if she was sweating it was the fire or her shovelling really heavy coals. Kate was helping the baby feed its food, taking so much care into one very special life, you can see that she cleaned the house really well that I was really impressed. At the beginning I thought a giant messy troll lived in here and didn’t bother to clean it up. And then I remembered that, I was that troll. Besides that, I thought it was the best night I have ever had e, until I heard the loudest knock on the door I have ever heard that made me jump like a angry kangaroo. …show more content…
Climax: I was too busy eating my kind of disgusting stew that I was really glad had something occupied to not go to the crooked door and see who’s terrifying face it is. While I was eating I was thinking about who it was at the door. Ned, Steve, Joe, who knows. I was waiting for Ellen or Kate to go get it but no one answered it. Instead everyone was doing their own thing that they look that they can’t hear anything at all. So I had to get up, I was actually upset that I didn't get to finish my stew in time so I yelled, “Can I just finish!". Once I opened the door, I wish I never did. It was Fitzpatrick in his not shining uniform. looking like he came out the over end of a huge washing machine but looks really mad and kind of weird than he is usually. He barged in and yells, "Dan Kelly you are under arrest, you must come with immediately!". Now I was even more angry one 1. I didn’t get to finish my stew and 2. Now I have to go with this bozo. Ellen can hear with hear super loud hearing ears, and Giant nosy nose to hear from the crooked fire place. She comes in screaming like a horse, "where's the warrant" and Kate was shocked of what has happened as I look at her horrid face of disappointment that she made. Ellen pulls me being on the end of a train, to the other room angry and upset telling me "what have you done this time" and I try to say something to convince her that I did nothing but I am too confused that I couldn’t even say anything at all. We start discussing about what I have done until I hear Kate who was screaming in the dark dining room with Fitzpatrick, "get your disgusting greasy paws off me!!!", me and Ellen run as fast as a cheetah into the room once Ellen sees Kate on the floor and Fitzpatrick looking around looking like a dog looking for his bone. Ellen runs for the dark and dirty coal shovel, then

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