Henry Mcfelly's The Survivors-Personal Narrative

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The Survivors It was august 21st 2005 Henry Mcfelly just got told he come to Maine his mother was not doing well he wanted to say one last goodbye. Sarah Stone a smart creative business woman had to go to Maine for her job head of this new company Narha. As she was excited she got woke up at 5 o’clock with a smile on her face. They got onto the small plane and were told it would be a ten hour flight from CA to Maine.
Two hours into the flight henry sitting they hyper and freaking out
Sarah asks “why are you doing going to Maine”?
Henry quickly responded “My mother is sick and the doctors aren’t sure how long she will live.
The pilot of the plane John says in fear “We may have delay due to turbulence.” The wind suddenly zoomed up and hit the metallic plane with a gust of wind which hit like a bus. Anna the co-pilot freaked out and fainted. As they all scream flying down 20,000 feet they all knew they shouldn’t have used a little plane. As John gets back control he steers up right as they get to the ground causing them to dodge a tree and land in a lake. Then they crash into the water at flying speeds. The plane flew out of the water a branch on a tree goes right through Anna’s chest. They all get out and reason they are in the middle of nowhere with no help. Now they are wishing they would have taken commercial. “Wait no this can’t be happening, HELP, HELP, HELP” Sarah screams. “It’s no use we are in the middle of the woods in Montana surrounded by no towns. “But I have to see my mom” Henry said angrily. “Well unless you have a phone where stuck” said John. Henry was so mad he could just scream. “Hey if we focus and work we can try to escape” John says. “What no way I need to be at my meeting tomorrow. This meeting could make me rich.” Sarah shouted “ Well it’s getting dark John,that your name right.” Henry said “Yea” John says. As they all walk further into the forest looking through the forest Henry see a hill. “Hey maybe we can get advantage point up there and maybe see a town.” “No way look up by the log there's bugs everywhere.” Henry easily ignores her and walks up the hill. “C'mon Sarah I can almost see our way out.” Henry says “The only thing you see up there is wood, with all the trees blocking.” John says. “Its getting dark,let's climb into the trees. Over there They have no sap or bugs it looks like” Sarah says. As they head over to the tree Henry and John both got up. Sarah couldn't pull herself up. “Need some help” Henry says while laughing. “Not your help!” She fell right into a big pile of mud as Henry
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They start to put up the metal and branches when a big just hits Sarah right onto a rock. As the water dribbles red he picks sarah off it then sunshine. “It’s morning what happen.” Sarah says” “You got knocked out last night.” Henry says “Where is John” Sarah says. “Early bird gets the umm fish.” John says Holding a fish in his hand walks up. “Nice but what about the storm” Sarah says. “I got the branches and the metal together.” Henry says. “How did I get knocked out” Sarah says. “You slipped I think and hit a rock” “I keep this fish for later I got a lighter to” John says. “Wait you had a lighter!” Henry and Sarah scream. “Yes but I forgot sorry can we just continue” John says.
As they head deep into the forest hours go by and they all get bored out of there minds. As they walk up this rough shagged mountain they encounter they see some elk. These elk are within 30 feet and they don’t look happy.
“Hey let's go this way” Henry whispers. Pointing left of the elk. As they walk away the elk slowly fade away. They then get to the top of the mountain where the see the beautiful

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