Personal Experiences: A Narrative Fiction

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Everything was so blurry when Cadence awoke.

All around her were countless blobs of indistinguishable colours, mixing and meshing and colliding in every direction—all of them so bright, yet concurrently seeming to be delved into absolute darkness, making the phenomenon intensely weird.

An immense pressure bore down on Cadence’s head as she slowly awoke from her unconsciousness, the last fragments of her most recent memories gradually fading away from her mind. As she sat up, reality slowly sunk in, and she found herself awake. Dim light shafted through the distant ceilings, and her eyes seared as if they were being used for the first time. She raised a hoof to block out some of the light, but it was in vain.

Eventually her eyes adjusted
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“Hmm,” Cadence said to herself, while pursing her lips. “Where am I? Why am I here? What happened before I got here?”

Cadence’s nebulous mind tried to make sense of everything, but it was as fruitless as expecting harvest after a prolonged drought. Thoughts of all sorts channeled through her mind, yet not a single one could insinuate the slightest hint as to why she was here, since they were all illogical and amorphous; but they were far from incoherent.

Fragments of recollections belled out in her head, but they were still too blurry to distinguish, so she focused by closing her eyes and tried putting the pieces together, like a
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How could her magic be depleted?

She had his curse, and she had him, the Crawler.

With one last attempt, Cadence channeled her mana through her horn and kept herself up.

She pushed through and prevailed.

In exactly three hours and thirty four minutes, Cadence transversed through the cave in her macabre condition, hoping to find an exit point or a ledge to climb. Her pain was beyond bearable, and it only worsened as time went by. Surely, there had to be an escape point somewhere. The moment she saw light beaming through a distant crack on the wall filled her with hope.

But it was futile. Her magic starting dwindling and she could no longer hold herself up, as her body had reached its point of sufferance, and it collapsed upon itself like a house of cards. She tumbled to the ground, chest first, sending excruciating shockwaves of pain, leaving her immobile. Oh, how she wished she stayed at the pool of water, drinking it and resting by it, before embarking blindly through dark, unfamiliar caves.

The last thing she heard was an evil laugh, and the world faded to

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