Berry Picking Poem Analysis

Improved Essays
Irving Layton’s “Berry Picking,” and Robert Lowell’s “Water,” are two poems that discuss the flawed nature of human relations by comparing them to the natural world. Imagery of nature and the natural world are used extensively in both poems to show comparisons between nature and relationships, as well as using nature as a contrast to human relationships. The natural world is portrayed as soft, simple and innocent in one poem, however it is viewed a hard and complex in the other. The two poems use different perceptions of nature to describe the same thought on human relationships: that they are imperfect. Both poems use the colours of nature as a comparison to relationships, using the common connotations that certain colours give to the reader. …show more content…
This poem rather than using positive imagery to show a contrast between human relationships and nature, shows nature in a colder light to show the coldness of human relationships. This poem has a repeated imagery of rock, using the word a total of five times through the eight stanzas. A rock is typically a symbol of strength and a symbol of something that is unchanging and solid. This concept of the rock is changed in this context as it is being something that gets eroded. The human relationship being compared to a rock signifies that the relationship was meant to be solid and everlasting, but the images of erosion make the rock powerless. The rock also is important to signify the coldness and harshness of the relationship. This becomes apparent in the final line where Lowell states “the water was too cold for us” (32). Rocks are considered to be cold objects, and since the relationship was compared to this cold rock, it is significant that the demise of the relationship was due to the cold. The poem also uses the imagery of death in nature to symbolize the death of the relationship. The line “it seems the colour / of iris, rotting and turning purpler,” (15-16), builds up a beautiful image of beauty from the word iris, to only be crushed by the word rotting. This contrast demonstrates how human relationships may seem to be perfect and beautiful but they metaphorically …show more content…
Lowell also used repeated words to emphasize the symbolism he created through his imagery of nature. This poem uses imagery of objects in nature that are strong but also cold and eventually weaken to compare to the similarly complex and flawed nature of human relationships. Both “Berry Picking,” by Irving Layton, and “Water,” by Robert Lowell, use images of nature as metaphors for imperfect human relationships. The first poem uses nature as a contrast to the failed marriage of the speaker, whereas the second poem uses harsh imaery of rocks to compare to the harshness of the speaker’s failed relationship. These poems both send the same message: that human relationships are difficult, complicated and flawed. They squash the ideology that human relationships are always perfect, and do this by showing something that is perfect, or imperfect in nature to show the respective contrast or

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Sometimes life is best explained in metaphors. Sometimes the hurt, pain, and anger found in life are more easily grasped when one looks at them in terms of other objects. This is how the poem,“The Minefield,” written by Diane Thiel, looks at pain and anger. Written in short and choppy lines with no clear rhythm or rhyming pattern, this poem tells the story of a man who witnessed his friend blown to pieces in a minefield. Because of this, the man who witnessed this terrifying tragedy has grown into an angry and broken soul.…

    • 1130 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Since the beginning of time, all of mankind has depended on the land for basic survival-such as the “Bare Necessities.” However, man began to stray away from “al-naturale” by finding any way to control nature and use it to their advantage. Therefore, over time, the relationship between man and nature grew despondently, just as Richard Louv emphasizes in his excerpt, the “Last Child in the Woods.” Louv stresses that the loss of nature will hit home in present and future generations by using an anecdote, rhetorical logos, and a sense of nostalgia through pathos.…

    • 772 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I like this poem because of the existential themes that Edward Hirsch tackles, such as: mortality, divinity, temporality, and individuality. I can see all the images that the author describes, and feel that I am a part of the poem, too. Even though it is a short poem, it can transmit so many emotions. I think that this poem is about an old man in a wheelchair (“Wheel me down to the shore”), who feels that he is about to die.…

    • 343 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Their Eyes Were Watching God by Zora Neale Hurston and “Lines…” by William Wordsworth are two pieces of writing that are related in a variety of ways, some clear and others more obtuse. One of the largest and most notable relations they have is the theme of nature within both of them. They both possess a regulating theme of nature. Whether it be through the characters, the setting, or the general vibe the writer sets, the idea of nature is very present throughout both writings and plays a large role in dictating the overall feel the reader gets from them. One of the more detailed presentations of nature in Their Eyes Were Watching God was when the author, speaking of Janie, stated that she “was stretched on her back beneath the pear tree soaking…

    • 1092 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Through human’s manufacturing developments, as they separate and begin to reject nature, they lose the comfort that nature once provided them with. As humanity’s materialism expands and mankind naïvely rejects and grows ever distant from nature, it loses and finds alternatives for the simplistic beauty of nature. Nature is the narrator and is calling for a reunion with mankind. Upon knowing the comfort that nature provides humanity with, nature attempts to remind man of the simplistic pleasures by calling out, “I know my sunshine pleases/ Despite thy wayward will” (11,12).…

    • 836 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    A Hero's Journey

    • 656 Words
    • 3 Pages

    The mountain stood high, and she stood beautiful. It’s peak was a calling and its side a deterrent. It was as if life had metaphorized…

    • 656 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    The rock, river, and tree are symphonic to the different people of the world and how they all contribute in diverse ways. The poem goes on to explain that these objects are “host to species long since departed, marked with a mastodon” implying that they carry historical wisdom. She lists the dinosaurs who left “dry tokens;” which were fossilized and later reassembled for display in museums. She says their “sojourn” or temporary stay on earth ended in a “hastening doom” which they had no way of preventing. In line seven and eight Maya Angelou uses long vowel sounds and internal rhyme to reflect the dull mood when describing the extinct…

    • 1162 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Comparison Between The Three Poems In the poems “The Passionate Shepherd” by Christopher Marlowe, “The Nymph 's reply to the Shepherd” by Sir Walter Raleigh, and “Raleigh Was Right” by William Carlos Williams, all share a central idea in unit one. They all view nature, either bad or good. The Shepherd and the Nymph both share images that tend to have the same thinking. In all the three poems, the authors depict how society views nature.…

    • 883 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    William Cullen Bryant's poem, “The Prairies,” expresses the beauty he first encounters of America's prairies and contrasts the beautiful and abundant image of an alive nature; “And fresh as the young earth, ere man had sinned/ The Prairies. I behold them for the first,” with the grim inevitability of death within the prairie. But from what death takes nature always gives back even when man has made it difficult to continue (495-497). Through juxtaposed images of life and death; Bryant is able to show their correlation, and personify nature to paint a beautiful, and haunting image of the prairies and early America.…

    • 262 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Many poets will express their perspectives or nauture in various ways. In the poems, “Ode to enchanted Light” by Pablo Neruda and “Sleeping in the Forest” by Mary Oliver, the poets utilize similar and contrasting key elements to express their views of the beauties and powers of nature. In “Ode to enchanted Light,” Pablo Neruda touches upon the beauties of light and appreciation for the nature that surrounds us, through the use of figuative language, theme, symbolism, and mood/tone. Mary Oliver also utilizes these elements to express the speakers admiration for the less noticable virtues of nature. In both of these poems, the poets uses related elements, that have their own similarities and differences between the pieces of literature.…

    • 752 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    This mood of melancholy grief supports the destructive theme of nature and love in how it projects the responses to such circumstances as described in the poem onto the reader, guiding them to emote the same reactions as…

    • 936 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Robert Frost strongly emphasises nature’s power and strength in its original state compared to mankind’s weakness in his 3 main poems: “Acquainted with the Night”, “Birches”, and “Desert Places”. This contrast between nature and humanity is mostly highlighted in “Desert Places”, when the narrator describes a scenic view by saying “And the ground almost covered smooth in snow, but a few weeds and stubble showing last”. Frost demonstrates the existence of mankind in nature, through the presence of “stubble” which suggests man’s interference with the natural world. Frost seems to criticise humanity, as he portrays it as destructive and brutal towards the world, as it leads, quite literally to the death of nature. However, Frost also emphasises…

    • 1292 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    The third and fourth lines of this poem are also metaphors. In nature everything eventually dies and is quite remembered when it is young and beautiful, but as time goes by the leaves die and become brittle and then new leaves are reborn. The entirety of this poem is about life and death cycle of humans. In this poem he uses a lot of metaphors just like “The Road not Taken”, however, he also uses quite a bit of alliteration in this one. The person speaking…

    • 1378 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Frost is the type of writer to keep religion and politics away from his poetry, and that is why he is so in tuned with nature throughout most of his poems because he makes it his focal point. The scenery and lifestyle of New England may seem generic and simple, but Frost put a deeper and darker meaning to all his poems out of plain sight. Even though “Fire and Ice” and “Nothing Gold Can Stay” convey different meanings, each poem uses the imagery of Nature and similar structure to convey their themes. In “Fire and Ice”, Frost wants to pose an idea of the wonder of his exact interpretation of his poem.…

    • 1036 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    As one of the most iconic American poets, Robert Frost’s work has stood the test of time. Though born in California, Frost moved to New England at age eleven and came to identify himself as a New Englander. That self-identification would become a staple of his later works as he would invest “in the New England terrain” and make use of the “simplicity of his images” (Norton Anthology, p. 727) accompanied by uncomplicated writing to give his poems a more natural feel. Frost’s poems were generalized by certain types: nature lyrics, which described a scene or event, dramatic narratives or generalizations, and humorous or sardonic works. His widely anthologized poem “Fire and Ice” falls between the categories of nature lyrics while also being somewhat…

    • 1340 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays