The abundance of personal experience hinders the effectiveness of her thesis because she focuses more on how she was affected and not enough on the entire Native American community. One of her first examples was when she was in school and confronted faculty and staff about her feelings and she says, “I guess I thought if I made it known that I felt appropriating Native American imagery was offensive, they’d stop. I was outnumbered, though, and my personal feelings didn't matter” (3). Stretten tries to make the readers feel bad for her when she says this but her statement does the opposite and loses the interests of the readers. This is not the only instance where she focuses on her personal
The abundance of personal experience hinders the effectiveness of her thesis because she focuses more on how she was affected and not enough on the entire Native American community. One of her first examples was when she was in school and confronted faculty and staff about her feelings and she says, “I guess I thought if I made it known that I felt appropriating Native American imagery was offensive, they’d stop. I was outnumbered, though, and my personal feelings didn't matter” (3). Stretten tries to make the readers feel bad for her when she says this but her statement does the opposite and loses the interests of the readers. This is not the only instance where she focuses on her personal