These are important pieces of information as they greatly affect whether the programs Kristof suggests later in the article would be effective and the subsequent cost of these programs. Another crucial piece of information is how the United States has, “...over the past 50 years,... faltered in supporting and educating children overall as other countries have moved ahead” (Kristof). The article says this quote but does not precisely explain how and why the United States has fallen behind, just that it has. When comparing various policies and spending of the United States and other countries, the article often fails to give a potential reason as to why they could be so different. Another issue is when addressing the mortality rates of young people in the U.S. and other countries, the article gives a flat number but fails to compare percentages, which would give a better idea of what the true difference is. Overall, the article could benefit greatly from better comparisons, which would allow the reader to truly grasp what Kristof was trying to convey. The article written by Smeeding and Thévenot expands upon this
These are important pieces of information as they greatly affect whether the programs Kristof suggests later in the article would be effective and the subsequent cost of these programs. Another crucial piece of information is how the United States has, “...over the past 50 years,... faltered in supporting and educating children overall as other countries have moved ahead” (Kristof). The article says this quote but does not precisely explain how and why the United States has fallen behind, just that it has. When comparing various policies and spending of the United States and other countries, the article often fails to give a potential reason as to why they could be so different. Another issue is when addressing the mortality rates of young people in the U.S. and other countries, the article gives a flat number but fails to compare percentages, which would give a better idea of what the true difference is. Overall, the article could benefit greatly from better comparisons, which would allow the reader to truly grasp what Kristof was trying to convey. The article written by Smeeding and Thévenot expands upon this