Your final draft was concise and you did a great job! You did a superb job incorporating the information from Stringer text with the best practices of action research. What stood out in my mind as a best practice of action research presented by Stringer was that a researcher needed to have an understanding of the background to gain insight to the problem being solved for valid results. Not knowing the background or history of the people being affect is much like baking a cake without all the ingredients.
God Bless!
Sheila