Sample Cover Letter Essay

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In this memo, I am going to evaluate a sample cover letter. This cover letter is from Sue Ling to Ms. Rhonda West, the customer service manager. It is intended for getting a customer service representative job. And the link of this sample cover letter is https://www.monster.com/career-advice/article/sample-cover-letter.
There are many criteria to evaluate a cover letter is good or bad. But I think the most important four criteria are tone, diction, structure and evidence. Thus, I will use these four criteria to judge this cover letter:

• Tone: the overall tone is appropriate to the employer. It is objective, logical and professional.
• Diction: the overall diction is suited for the type of cover letter. All dictions are formal and professional.

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