My prompt responses are also getting better than before. The very first big assignment I did in English 1010 was the Literacy Narrative Paper. I didn’t do well on that. My paragraphs were not developed nicely and my ideas were unclear. Next, I did the Summary Paper. I was not able to summarize the text properly. My thesis was not strong and my ideas were confusing. I had too much wordiness and repetition of ideas. It was distressing to me. I didn’t give up, instead, I tried much harder and used the resources that were available to me like the WRT Zone. I also got help from the Professor through his comments on my papers and some other people. Thankfully, I have learned to improve through my hard work and strong will to succeed. In my response paper, I succeed to reduce my wordiness, organize my paragraphs, and integrate my ideas. I had less wordiness and my ideas were clearly explained. I could summarize and respond to the text pretty well. Even though, I supported my thesis with sufficient evidence, my thesis was a bit unclear. I still had lots of grammatical errors, but I was happy with my little improvement and thankful to English
My prompt responses are also getting better than before. The very first big assignment I did in English 1010 was the Literacy Narrative Paper. I didn’t do well on that. My paragraphs were not developed nicely and my ideas were unclear. Next, I did the Summary Paper. I was not able to summarize the text properly. My thesis was not strong and my ideas were confusing. I had too much wordiness and repetition of ideas. It was distressing to me. I didn’t give up, instead, I tried much harder and used the resources that were available to me like the WRT Zone. I also got help from the Professor through his comments on my papers and some other people. Thankfully, I have learned to improve through my hard work and strong will to succeed. In my response paper, I succeed to reduce my wordiness, organize my paragraphs, and integrate my ideas. I had less wordiness and my ideas were clearly explained. I could summarize and respond to the text pretty well. Even though, I supported my thesis with sufficient evidence, my thesis was a bit unclear. I still had lots of grammatical errors, but I was happy with my little improvement and thankful to English