Mako: An Old Man's Worst Mistake

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Mako is the father of 2 kids. His son Tado and his daughter Odo. Tado is a 13 year old boy who was skinny but strong. His hair was short and shiny black. He wanted to be a demon hunter just like his Dad. Odo is a 12 year old girl. She had nice long brown hair,her dress was as pretty as a rainbow, and she had nice green eyes. She wanted to be a world class chef like her Mom. She was also caring, kind and sweet.Then there is his wife Linda with her long straight brown hair,with her blue eyes and her blue and black dress. she was sweet, loving, caring and smart. After Mako’s first victory he became Bora Bora’s protector. He fought hundreds of ghost and bandits.

But one day it all changed. Rain turning into fire,water turning into blood and homes collapsing into the ground.It was chaos.
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He went to Tupa’s cave to find out there is a rift to the spirit world where he finds Tupa’s family. BAM! Mako was knocked out unconscious. When he wakes up he sees his wife, his kids, his mom, and his grandfather. The ghost said that they were going to hurt his family unless they kill him.

Before they can kill Mako he used his knife to get out. He blinded the ghost with his powder. So he got his family out just in time but before he could get out the ghost grabs him. They slammed him on the floor Mako was weak, exhausted, and hurt. But before the ghost can finish him KABOOM! The spirit of Mako's father came. He saved Mako's life and defeated the ghost. During the fight Mako escaped. When he got home Bora Bora was dark and gloomy. The houses were on fire, the sky was dark,Families were crying,the waters red,and the yellower grass. Then he found his family.
"Dad! You're here," said the kids.
"Honey thank goodness you're ok,"said

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