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HOW DID JEFFERSON DAVIS’S PRESIDENCY AFFECT THE CIVIL WAR?
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Hi, HM! Ms. Wells is right in that you still have to make a stronger connection to duty, honor country, especially in the intro paragraph.
In other words, read your body paragraphs. Each one clearly connects to duty, honor, country.
Now you have to go back and make your introduction body sentences connect to the ideals of each body paragraph.
Also, like Ms. Wells said, I think you can back it up more too with a little more research. I found some short publications YOU REALLY SHOULD …show more content…
He was one of 10 children born into a Mississippi family with strong military tradition. Davis’s father and uncles fought in the American Revolutionary War, and all of his brothers fought in the War of 1812(“Jefferson Davis”). In 1824, President James Monroe requested that Davis, at 16 years old, become a cadet at the United States Military Academy at West Point (“Jefferson Davis”). While at West Point, Davis began living according to the maxims stated in West Point’s Mission Statement. "To educate, train, and inspire the Corps of Cadets so that each graduate is a commissioned leader of character committed to the values of Duty, Honor, Country and prepared for a career of professional excellence and service to the Nation as an officer in the United States Army." This maxim means explains that each graduate of the West Point Military Academy morals and military based actions are influenced by this saying. From this moment forward, “...Duty, Honor and Country…” was linked to his love for the United States and the southern way of …show more content…
He was chosen as the provisional president in Montgomery, Alabama by the Confederate Convention. Despite the fact Davis was hoping to be the head of the army for the Confederate States of America (CITATION), he was sworn in as President of the Confederate States of America on February 18th,