Bing Home Run-Personal Narrative

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Jax Balkon
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Bing bang slam home run, I’ve been waiting for this my whole life. As I walked into the stadium I asked my dad were we were sitting he pointed and my jaw dropped and my eyes gazed at the seat, I was so happy.

As I'm playing the I pad I am getting bored so fast I didn't know what to do. Im shivering my legs and I can't sit still. Then my stomach rumbled I… felt...sick ! I put the Ipad away wanting to throw up. My brother was being annoying like usual. As we roll up in my dad's red car.

My Dad says, “ We're going to the tigers game!” I SHOOT out of the car like a bullet. As I walk into Comerica park, Tiger stadium I see the blue and orange tiger on top of the

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